Group: 30 Second Extract

Feedback from the class

Positives

• The overlay of two images showing different angles of the fire projection looks very effective, it gives the video an added layer of texture which makes it appear aesthetically pleasing.
• The cut between the animal masks helps to identify the audience with wildlife animals and links them well with the field location.
• The misty background works well with the mood of the track, providing it with a dismal feel.

Improvements

• We need to make the cutting rate faster in order to make it conform to a pop music video and fit better with the pace of the track.
• We could cut to projection shots in some of the field locations so that we have short pieces of footage showing to keep the audience entertained.